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Poem Corner O.o

Post by Uvaaka on Sat Apr 04, 2009 8:04 pm

Hello, you can has read my crappy poems cause i said Very Happy


Edit*forgive my sucky spelling for my edchoomahcation is off fadly.....and that im a noob at poetry...*


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Re: Poem Corner O.o

Post by Uvaaka on Sat Apr 04, 2009 8:07 pm

Warmth of an unseen queen

For a long time i lived in the darkness,
The anger fueled and provoked my hate,
The past raped my heart and made me break,
The insanity in my viens made me forsake,
The blood in my body, Anger to fortake..

Till one day under dogwood trees i stood,
i knelt down and pulled back my hood,
The wind circled the peddles around me,
White and pink, like a loving kiss to be.
Her kiss on my lips forced tears of joy,
No long do i live in hate like a heartless boy,

I stood up and looked at the crowd around,
The look of awe and joy was without sound,
No words could speak of what was seen,
I was touched by the warmth of a unseen queen,
So i held my head up high and cryed in my solace,
I stood in comfort and joy, now a man not a boy.

No more duality, no more hurt or insanity,
No more hate or cold cruel inhumanity,
No more tourture and ravaged part to see,
I am alive fully and open to her majesty.
The blood in me no longer thick with spite,
But now the blood is thick with loving light
No more war, no more need to kill or fight...

~Uvaaka Wolfun
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Post by Adelate[Admin] on Sun Apr 05, 2009 1:39 am

O.o you wrote that YOUR SELF????? its GREAT .. *speechless* Ô_o

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Post by Uvaaka on Sun Apr 05, 2009 2:05 am

Adelate[Admin] wrote:O.o you wrote that YOUR SELF????? its GREAT .. *speechless* Ô_o

xD yes i wrote it straight out of this trash i call a heart, Thank you XD i hope it really was great.
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Post by Adelate[Admin] on Sun Apr 05, 2009 2:10 am

Its sad and makes me feel somehow good ... damn u !! for tricking me XD

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A nother one

Post by Uvaaka on Sun Apr 05, 2009 2:14 am

Pointman, Ready to Die

It was 130 degrees and a sandstorm hailing
in the distance i could hear screams wailing
we unload from the trucks and rush the house
Alpha up front bravo silently in the back
on the count of 3 we bust in the attack

one, my eyes scan the streets around
bodies and blood everywhere on the ground
the sickness i feel as i do my job
the lives of humans i shall rob
I am the pointman, i am ready to die
Just tell my mother not to cry

two, My hands on my rifle of death
controlled pairs take last breaths
with it and my blade i am gods jade
today without knowing i am a martyr
I am the pointmanm i am ready to die
just Tell my girl not to cry

three, We move one step back
my heart aches as my throat lacks
i am tense and ready to face my end
Dear god forgive me my sins
I am the pointman, i am ready to die
just tell them im allright

Mark, the door i kick open but i stop
my weapon fires as bodies drop
the enemy full in the room opens fire
Pelted and wounded and battered and torn
with my last 2 rounds i kill the last enemy
I am the pointman, as i fall to the ground
I cry for my loved ones, as my heart pounds

Medic, i hear the screams of my squad lead
they rip off the armor and look as i bleed
a miracle of god , i still live and breath
2 wounds per arm and 1 in the chest
today is the day i cryed true tears of test
for i cry of the people i lay to rest...

Alive, i walk now on streets with my love
no more war, no more scores,no more tears
im sick of all the pain and all the fears
My love holds me close wene im cold
and i hold her closer wene shes hurt
God hold us both from the bloody dirt
for no more shall i wear a blood stained shirt..

~Uvaaka Wolfsun
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Re: Poem Corner O.o

Post by Real on Sun Apr 05, 2009 3:05 am

See, I told you to post it. ^^
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Post by Uvaaka on Sun Apr 05, 2009 3:24 am

Real wrote:See, I told you to post it. ^^

xD j00zor was ritez!
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Post by Uvaaka on Sun Apr 05, 2009 3:48 am

Adelate[Admin] wrote:Its sad and makes me feel somehow good ... damn u !! for tricking me XD

Such is the sickness i fortake and forsake. Both painful and Solace in one factor that i cannot explain... .i need to get drunk so badly -.-
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Re: Poem Corner O.o

Post by Real on Sun Apr 05, 2009 3:48 am

Uvaaka wrote:
Adelate[Admin] wrote:Its sad and makes me feel somehow good ... damn u !! for tricking me XD

Such is the sickness i fortake and forsake. Both painful and Solace in one factor that i cannot explain... .i need to get drunk so badly -.-

>>

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Share?! *cough*
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Post by Uvaaka on Sun Apr 05, 2009 4:00 am

Real wrote:
Uvaaka wrote:
Adelate[Admin] wrote:Its sad and makes me feel somehow good ... damn u !! for tricking me XD

Such is the sickness i fortake and forsake. Both painful and Solace in one factor that i cannot explain... .i need to get drunk so badly -.-

>>

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Share?! *cough*

LOL sure lets go get drunk... or do oyu mean share my sickness? cause idk if u want that lol xD
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and a nother

Post by Uvaaka on Sun Apr 05, 2009 4:41 am

Let Go

I look into the dark sky
Soaked in blood i ask why
It wont rain to clean the shame
Is life worth death in fame?

The clouds tune dark and cold
The air burns the skin of the bold,
The snow turns to ashes in my hands
What have i done to this land?

I have taken away my inner peace,
I have hurt the innocent without cease
I have burned the living and tossed the dead
Oh my god what has gotten into my head,

My heart dark and filled with death
The air in my lungs burned my chest
Please whisper to me natures breath,
Clear the pain from my bloody crest,

I look in the sky with tears in my eyes,
The wind stops and the ashes turn to snow,
the rivers thaw and life starts to flow,
All i had to do was man up and let go...

~Uvaaka Wolfsun
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Re: Poem Corner O.o

Post by Adelate[Admin] on Sun Apr 05, 2009 12:58 pm

Uvaaka wrote:Pointman, Ready to Die

It was 130 degrees and a sandstorm hailing
in the distance i could hear screams wailing
we unload from the trucks and rush the house
Alpha up front bravo silently in the back
on the count of 3 we bust in the attack

one, my eyes scan the streets around
bodies and blood everywhere on the ground
the sickness i feel as i do my job
the lives of humans i shall rob
I am the pointman, i am ready to die
Just tell my mother not to cry

two, My hands on my rifle of death
controlled pairs take last breaths
with it and my blade i am gods jade
today without knowing i am a martyr
I am the pointmanm i am ready to die
just Tell my girl not to cry

three, We move one step back
my heart aches as my throat lacks
i am tense and ready to face my end
Dear god forgive me my sins
I am the pointman, i am ready to die
just tell them im allright

Mark, the door i kick open but i stop
my weapon fires as bodies drop
the enemy full in the room opens fire
Pelted and wounded and battered and torn
with my last 2 rounds i kill the last enemy
I am the pointman, as i fall to the ground
I cry for my loved ones, as my heart pounds

Medic, i hear the screams of my squad lead
they rip off the armor and look as i bleed
a miracle of god , i still live and breath
2 wounds per arm and 1 in the chest
today is the day i cryed true tears of test
for i cry of the people i lay to rest...

Alive, i walk now on streets with my love
no more war, no more scores,no more tears
im sick of all the pain and all the fears
My love holds me close wene im cold
and i hold her closer wene shes hurt
God hold us both from the bloody dirt
for no more shall i wear a blood stained shirt..

~Uvaaka Wolfsun

WOW... its crazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzy !!

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Post by Real on Sun Apr 05, 2009 1:43 pm

Uvaaka wrote:
Real wrote:
Uvaaka wrote:
Adelate[Admin] wrote:Its sad and makes me feel somehow good ... damn u !! for tricking me XD

Such is the sickness i fortake and forsake. Both painful and Solace in one factor that i cannot explain... .i need to get drunk so badly -.-

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Share?! *cough*

LOL sure lets go get drunk... or do oyu mean share my sickness? cause idk if u want that lol xD

Lol xD You gotta buy since I'm only 20. ;__; haha
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Post by GigiVamp on Sun Apr 05, 2009 8:13 pm

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Especially after I got through with you
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Post by Uvaaka on Sun Apr 05, 2009 9:20 pm

GigiVamp wrote:Roses are red
Violets are blue
Especially after I got through with you

Roses are Red,
Violets are Blue,
love is a lie,
For this much is true.
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Post by Uvaaka on Sun Apr 05, 2009 9:23 pm

Real wrote:
Uvaaka wrote:
Real wrote:
Uvaaka wrote:
Adelate[Admin] wrote:Its sad and makes me feel somehow good ... damn u !! for tricking me XD

Such is the sickness i fortake and forsake. Both painful and Solace in one factor that i cannot explain... .i need to get drunk so badly -.-

>>

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Share?! *cough*

LOL sure lets go get drunk... or do oyu mean share my sickness? cause idk if u want that lol xD

Lol xD You gotta buy since I'm only 20. ;__; haha


xD im only 20 too... well i look like 30 and a military ID helps so yeah im sure i could pull it off XD
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Post by Real on Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:32 am

I thought you were 22, for real. :\
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Post by konata Izumi on Wed Apr 08, 2009 6:22 am

how do you write so well i cant even think of anything to put down
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Nother poemzor

Post by Uvaaka on Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:13 pm

I am losing my soul here
every scream i try not to hear
All the flames around me
its like im in the bloody sea
the music of explosions and death
i take off my mask and take a breath
Oh my god this is so sick
i speak in fear as bodies i kick
As night comes over the fire keeps
everyone died slow before the sleep
I look at myself and ask of myself
Who am i and what has happened
I feel my fist clench as my mind snaps
All the agony i feel is burning inside
Everything that i do is insane
im sick of the blood and killing
war is not at all that fullfilling
Firefights and death surrounds us
the burning of napalm on the sand
Killing and raping the land
clouds of red and black
all i can do is turn my back
as the tears fill in my mask
i look at you my freind and ask
what have i become from my past
if i stray away kill me just incase
it seems like god has given me a place

Burning lands and unforgiving sands
The child i carried in my blood stained hands
i fall to my knees and cry out to god
burn me inside and burn me till i sod
Beat me down with your anger
i am less than human and less than life
kill me now ive had too much strife
the pain hurts too much like a hot knife
twisting into my heart tearing me apart
im begging you on my knees i need a new start
Tears of blood fall from my mask now
forgive me i ask god but how
Napalm sands and screams in the dust
how can i be forgiven god in you i trust
Take my sins and send them to hell
im sick of hiding in my unholy shell...

~Uvaaka Wolfsun~





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